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CoJ Prologue Pg. 4

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Next page: Coming soon!
Previous page: [link]

THE WAIT FOR PAGE 4 IS FINALLY OVURRR HAHHAAAA!

Yes, this has been sitting on my computer for a lloooonnggg time, mostly because after my background started to go wrong again I lost inspiration to color it. But I believe I have partially brought it back from the dead. YAY.

Gee Logan, your reactions seem a little suspicious hmmm :iconlarryseeswhatyoudid: *coughLOGAN'SGUMSAREUSUALLYPURPLEcough*

The style of shading is a little different here, and I think I might keep it this way. Its alot easier to do than the other style, and this one seems more realistic I think.

And in the last panel, I won't tell you what the symbol is for. But I will say that the green rock in the middle is the comet of jade, and those green blobs to the side are trees. Yeah. They suck. Alot. And my grass isn't very detailed either -_- But on the other hand, I'm fairly happy with my mountains this time. They're more detailed than they were on the last three pages, and this makes me happy. ^^

Soooo... yep! WEEEE

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AlfaFilly's avatar
OH NOOEES
LOGAN HAS TEH GEEERMS
Er... I mean... stuff. :paranoid:
...
I BET 50 COOKIES HE'LL BE A ZOMBIE.

Haha, anyway, very nice shading style here. It's very simple but fitting. Very lovely.

And yaay you did the speech balloons! You get teh priiize! :cookie::gummybear::cookie::gummybear:

In panels 2, 4, and 5, Wasario only has 3 legs.
As well, in the future, I wouldn't put two characters in the same pose unless they were intently doing so. Such as in panel 5. Which I'm sure you might have done unintentionally. ^^;

And I think I might have mentioned it before, but legs don't bend like they do in panel 4. Here's a redline WITH COLOUUUR to show an example of a quick fix: [link]

Erg.. sorry for so many crits. ^^;